Godfather Death

The new book is really coming along, and so is my reading to discover what fairy tales are really about. Last night I read in Maria Tatar's The Hard Facts About Grimms' Fairy Talesthat fairy tales can be seen as "the childhood of fiction". This had me imagining Pride and Prejudice as a fairy tale- once upon a time there was a poor peasant with five daughters.... definitely could have some fun with that. Anyhow here's a trial layout of the first 2 pages of Godfather Death.